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TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Improved issue-point and topic-stress positioning
- Enhanced topic strings for coherent subject flow
- Strengthened verb choices (active voice where appropriate)
- Eliminated weak constructions ('then', excessive passives)
- Fixed typo: 'excess' → 'access' in Section 3
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Streamlined paragraph flow
- Better topic positioning across paragraph boundaries
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment
- Made 'What is new?' and 'Why will it succeed?' explicit
- Added section transitions linking methodology to metrics
- Connected risks analysis to broader impacts
- Ensured each section answers its core questions clearly
- Added closing transitions to Sections 5 and 6
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