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Editorial pass: Gopen-style tactical improvements, operational flow, and strategic coherence
Three-level editorial pass completed:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Broke up complex compound sentences for clarity
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Strengthened verb choices and active voice
- Made writing more direct and impactful
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Added backward-looking references between subsections
- Improved transitions and flow
- Enhanced coherence within sections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Ensured Heilmeier question alignment in each section
- Strengthened section-to-section linkages
- Clarified summary statements
Files modified:
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/research_statement_v1.tex
- 1-goals-and-outcomes/v1.tex
- 2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex
- 3-research-approach/v3.tex
- 4-metrics-of-success/v1.tex
- 5-risks-and-contingencies/v1.tex
- 6-broader-impacts/v1.tex
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