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Copy edit: Multi-pass editorial improvements
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen principles: topic-stress positioning, verb choice
- Removed wordiness and redundant phrases
- Tightened prose for clarity and directness
- Fixed inconsistent punctuation
OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Enhanced paragraph coherence
- Added strategic paragraph breaks for better flow
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier question alignment
- Strengthened section transitions
- Ensured consistent voice across sections