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Tactical (sentence-level) improvements: - Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles throughout - Improved topic-stress positioning and topic strings - Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice - Eliminated redundancy and improved parallel structure - Tightened phrasing while maintaining technical precision Operational (paragraph/section) improvements: - Added roadmap sentences at section openings - Improved transitions between paragraphs and subsections - Strengthened coherence within sections - Better signposting of three-mode classification - Clearer flow from procedures → synthesis → verification Strategic (document-level) improvements: - Strengthened Heilmeier question alignment in each section - Added forward and backward references between sections - Improved document-level coherence and narrative flow - Clarified how each section answers its Heilmeier questions - Explicit connections: Sec 2 (gap) → Sec 3 (solution) → Sec 4-6 (validation/impact) All changes preserve technical accuracy and maintain formal tone appropriate for doctoral candidacy proposal.
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