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Copy-edit: multi-level editorial pass
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's issue-point and topic-stress positioning
- Strengthened verb choices (active voice preferred)
- Improved clarity and directness
- Removed unnecessary passive constructions
- Tightened wordy phrases
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Enhanced flow within sections
- Added paragraph breaks for clarity
- Moved supporting evidence closer to main claims
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier question framing throughout
- Improved consistency in section summaries
- Enhanced forward/backward references between sections
- Clarified parallel structure in lists and explanations