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Multi-level editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles throughout:
- Combined short choppy sentences for better flow
- Strengthened topic-stress positioning
- Tightened verb choices and reduced passive voice
- Improved paragraph transitions and coherence
- Enhanced document-level Heilmeier alignment
- Removed redundant content (duplicate paragraph in research approach)
All changes preserve technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.