- TACTICAL: Improved sentence-level clarity per Gopen principles
- Stronger verb choices (cannot vs lacks tools, cannot vs fails)
- Better issue-point positioning (new info at sentence end)
- Topic-stress consistency (familiar info at start)
- Eliminated weak constructions (that are → direct adjectives)
- OPERATIONAL: Enhanced paragraph and section flow
- Added transition sentences between subsections
- Improved coherence in state-of-the-art progression
- Clearer bridges between risk categories
- Better linkage from discrete to continuous verification
- STRATEGIC: Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment
- Made 'What is new?' and 'Why will it succeed?' explicit
- Added 'State of the art' and 'The gap' headers
- Consistent question format (How do we...? vs How we...)
- Added roadmap at end of Goals section
No content changes—only editorial improvements for clarity and impact.
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