Split
93e7f9bba2
Editorial pass: Gopen sentence structure + paragraph flow + Heilmeier alignment
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point positioning and topic-stress
- Shortened compound sentences for clarity
- Strengthened verb choices (active over passive)
- Enhanced topic strings for better flow
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Added transition sentences between subsections
- Improved coherence within sections
- Clarified connections between ideas
- Enhanced paragraph-to-paragraph flow
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Tightened Heilmeier question answers in each section
- Strengthened 'Who cares? Why now?' in Broader Impacts
- Improved global coherence across sections
- Ensured section summaries clearly answer assigned questions