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Copy-editing pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
Tactical (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning per Gopen's framework
- Strengthened verb choices (active voice, concrete verbs)
- Eliminated weak constructions and unnecessary nominalizations
- Enhanced topic strings for better paragraph coherence
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Strengthened transitions between subsections
- Improved paragraph flow and coherence
- Clarified relationships between ideas
Strategic (document-level):
- Reinforced Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout
- Strengthened section summaries to explicitly answer assigned questions
- Improved cross-references between sections
- Enhanced overall narrative flow from problem → solution → validation