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Three-pass editorial review following Gopen's Sense of Structure: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Improved topic-stress positioning for clearer emphasis - Tightened topic strings for better paragraph coherence - Converted passive constructions to active voice - Strengthened verb choice throughout OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section): - Added explicit transitions between major subsections - Improved flow from state-of-art → research approach - Clarified relationships between transitory/stabilizing/expulsory modes - Strengthened section-to-section bridges STRATEGIC (document-level): - Made Heilmeier Catechism questions more explicit in Broader Impacts - Clarified novelty claims in Research Approach (three innovations) - Strengthened mapping of document structure to Heilmeier questions - Improved strategic framing of risks as preserving research value
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