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Copy edit: multi-level editorial pass
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved issue-point positioning and topic-stress alignment
- Strengthened verb choices and eliminated weak constructions
- Tightened sentence flow and eliminated redundancies
- Enhanced clarity through better subordination
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between paragraphs
- Enhanced coherence within sections
- Streamlined narrative flow
- Better connected ideas across subsections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Strengthened Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout
- Made Heilmeier questions more explicit in section summaries
- Improved section linkages and forward/backward references
- Enhanced global coherence of the proposal narrative