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Split 65d16b411e Editorial pass: Tactical (sentence-level), Operational (flow), and Strategic (Heilmeier) improvements

Tactical (Sentence-Level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning throughout
- Converted passive constructions to active voice
- Strengthened weak verbs and topic positions
- Enhanced issue-point positioning in key sentences

Operational (Paragraph/Section):
- Strengthened transitions between subsections
- Improved coherence within sections, especially State of the Art and Research Approach
- Added forward/backward references to maintain flow
- Clarified relationships between continuous verification types

Strategic (Document-Level):
- Explicit Heilmeier catechism framing in section openings
- Strengthened 'What is new?' and 'Why will it succeed?' in Research Approach
- Added explicit answers to who cares/why now in Broader Impacts
- Improved section-to-section linking to maintain narrative arc
- Clarified novelty: compositional architecture, mode classification, procedural decomposition

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1-goals-and-outcomes

Editorial pass: Tactical (sentence-level), Operational (flow), and Strategic (Heilmeier) improvements

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2-state-of-the-art

Editorial pass: Tactical (sentence-level), Operational (flow), and Strategic (Heilmeier) improvements

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3-research-approach

Editorial pass: Tactical (sentence-level), Operational (flow), and Strategic (Heilmeier) improvements

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4-metrics-of-success

Editorial pass: Tactical (sentence-level), Operational (flow), and Strategic (Heilmeier) improvements