Split 4a3c7d302a Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements ...

TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning throughout
- Strengthened verb choices (prefer active voice)
- Reduced wordiness while maintaining precision
- Fixed parallel structure in lists

OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level):
- Enhanced transitions between subsections
- Improved paragraph flow and coherence
- Consolidated related ideas for clarity

STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Sharpened Heilmeier question answers
- Improved cross-section linkage
- Ensured consistent framing throughout

All changes preserve technical content and argument structure while
improving clarity and impact.

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