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Three-level editorial review per Gopen's Sense of Structure and Heilmeier alignment: TACTICAL (sentence-level): - Broke up overly long sentences for clarity - Positioned known information before new (topic-stress) - Converted passive constructions to active where appropriate - Clarified logical relationships with shorter, crisper sentences - Improved verb choice and sentence flow OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level): - Added bridging sentences to improve flow between ideas - Strengthened transitions between subsections - Improved coherence within sections - Clarified argument structure in key passages STRATEGIC (document-level): - Verified Heilmeier question alignment in each section - Improved section summaries to reinforce answers - Strengthened linkages between sections - Ensured consistent narrative thread throughout Focus: Changes that genuinely improve clarity and impact, not nitpicky edits.
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