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Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Strengthened verbs (cannot → fail, cannot handle → fail with)
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Reduced passive voice where active voice clarifies agency
- Tightened repetitive constructions
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Separated complex ideas for better flow
- Eliminated redundant sentences
- Enhanced coherence within sections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier catechism alignment throughout
- Strengthened section transitions with explicit references
- Ensured consistent terminology
- Polished cross-references between sections
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