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Editorial pass: Gopen principles + Heilmeier alignment
Three-level editorial revision:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning (old→new info flow)
- Strengthened verb choices and reduced passive voice
- Enhanced topic string consistency across sentences
- Tightened choppy sentence sequences into clearer constructions
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Strengthened transitions between paragraphs
- Improved forward reference and backward connection
- Enhanced section coherence and flow
- Clarified subsection purposes and linkages
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Reinforced Heilmeier Catechism alignment in each section
- Strengthened cross-section linkages
- Made explicit connections between 'what/why/how/risks/impact'
- Enhanced the narrative arc from problem → solution → validation → impact