Three-level editorial improvements:
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's issue-point and topic-stress positioning throughout
- Improved verb choice and sentence clarity
- Tightened passive constructions to active voice
- Enhanced topic strings for better paragraph coherence
OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level):
- Strengthened transitions between subsections
- Improved flow within complex technical sections
- Made mode classification rationale more explicit
- Enhanced coherence in verification methodology
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Made Heilmeier Catechism alignment explicit in section transitions
- Added structured mapping of sections to Heilmeier questions in Sec 1
- Strengthened summary sections to reinforce question-answer structure
- Improved subsection headings to signal content and purpose
Changes preserve all technical content while significantly improving
clarity, flow, and argument structure.
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