TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's issue-point positioning
- Strengthened verb choices (active over passive where appropriate)
- Reduced wordiness while maintaining technical precision
- Improved topic-stress positioning for better flow
- Tightened long sentences for readability
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Smoothed transitions between paragraphs
- Added explicit figure references where needed
- Improved subsection transitions in formal methods section
- Enhanced flow from theoretical to practical sections
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Ensured each section clearly addresses its Heilmeier question
- Improved consistency of Heilmeier framing across sections
- Strengthened transitions between major sections
- Verified alignment of outcomes with stated research questions
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