Tactical (sentence-level):
- Applied Gopen's Sense of Structure principles
- Broke long sentences into shorter, clearer statements
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Strengthened verb choice and reduced weak constructions
Operational (paragraph/section):
- Enhanced transitions between paragraphs and subsections
- Added connective tissue referencing previous sections
- Improved flow and coherence within sections
Strategic (document-level):
- Verified Heilmeier question alignment across all sections
- Strengthened section summaries and transitions
- Ensured each section properly sets up the next
- Maintained consistent narrative arc from gap → solution → impact
Split
256f770846