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Multi-pass editorial review: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Strengthened verb choices (fail/prove vs. cannot/can)
- Removed weak constructions (can be/may be → is/are)
- Improved topic-stress positioning
- Enhanced parallel structure in lists
- Tightened passive constructions where appropriate
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Improved transitions between subsections
- Strengthened flow from transitory → stabilizing → expulsory modes
- Enhanced coherence in formal methods discussion
- Better linkage between HARDENS and dL subsections
- Clearer progression in continuous controller classification
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Sharpened Heilmeier question answers throughout
- Improved section-to-section linkages
- Strengthened research contribution clarity
- Enhanced motivation for methodology choices
- Better alignment of conclusions with next section openings
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