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Multi-level editorial pass: Gopen's Sense of Structure + Heilmeier alignment
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning for better flow
- Tightened verb choices (active vs passive)
- Condensed choppy sequences into stronger compound sentences
- Enhanced topic strings between sentences
OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Strengthened transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Improved logical flow within sections
- Enhanced coherence of argument progression
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Sharpened Heilmeier question answers at section endings
- Improved document-level coherence and linking
- Strengthened connections between sections
Focus: genuine clarity improvements without nitpicking