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Editorial pass: Gopen + Heilmeier alignment
TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Applied issue-point positioning (old info → new info)
- Strengthened verb choices, reduced nominalizations
- Eliminated unnecessary passive constructions
- Improved topic string coherence across sentences
- Split overly complex sentences for clarity
OPERATIONAL (paragraph-level):
- Strengthened transitions between subsections
- Improved paragraph flow within sections
- Enhanced coherence within related paragraphs
- Clarified relationships between ideas
STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Tightened Heilmeier question alignment
- Improved section-to-section linkages
- Made explicit connections clearer
- Ensured each section clearly answers its Heilmeier questions
Focus: clarity and impact improvements without nitpicking.
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