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Three-pass editorial review: Pass 1 (Tactical - sentence-level): - Improved topic-stress positioning for emphasis - Strengthened verb choice and topic strings - Broke long, complex sentences into clearer shorter ones - Fixed parallel structure inconsistencies - Tightened hedging and unnecessary words Pass 2 (Operational - paragraph/section): - Strengthened transitions between subsections - Improved logical flow within sections - Enhanced parallel structure in key arguments - Clarified connections between ideas Pass 3 (Strategic - document-level): - Strengthened Heilmeier question alignment in section summaries - Improved parallel structure in 'three innovations' and 'three factors' - Made strategic points more prominent and explicit - Enhanced forward references between sections Overall: Improved clarity, emphasis, and coherence throughout while maintaining technical accuracy and Dane's analytical voice.
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