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Split 00cc649127 Multi-level editorial pass: Gopen's Sense of Structure + Heilmeier alignment

TACTICAL (sentence-level):
- Improved topic-stress positioning for better flow
- Tightened verb choices (active vs passive)
- Condensed choppy sequences into stronger compound sentences
- Enhanced topic strings between sentences

OPERATIONAL (paragraph/section):
- Strengthened transitions between paragraphs and sections
- Improved logical flow within sections
- Enhanced coherence of argument progression

STRATEGIC (document-level):
- Sharpened Heilmeier question answers at section endings
- Improved document-level coherence and linking
- Strengthened connections between sections

Focus: genuine clarity improvements without nitpicking

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1-goals-and-outcomes

Multi-level editorial pass: Gopen's Sense of Structure + Heilmeier alignment

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2-state-of-the-art

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3-research-approach

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4-metrics-of-success

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5-risks-and-contingencies

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6-broader-impacts

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.DS_Store

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biblatex.sty

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CLAUDE.md

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dane_proposal_format.cls

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EDITORIAL_SUMMARY_2026-03-09.md

Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements

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EDITORIAL_SUMMARY.md

Add editorial summary documenting changes and observations

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ERLM_Request_for_Proposals.pdf

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goals-only.tex

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Lang et al. - 2021 - Formal Verification Applied to Spacecraft Attitude Control.pdf

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main.aux

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main.log

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main.pdf

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main.toc

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README.md

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