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751a25780f Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements 
Tactical (sentence-level):
- Strengthened weak verbs and passive constructions
- Improved issue-point positioning (old info first, new info in stress position)
- Removed unnecessary hedging phrases
- Fixed active/passive voice for clarity

Operational (paragraph/section):
- Added transition sentences between major subsections
- Strengthened flow between State of the Art and Research Approach
- Added connecting tissue between continuous controller types
- Improved coherence within outcomes section

Strategic (document-level):
- Made 'what's new' explicit with highlighted innovation statement
- Added summary paragraph to State of the Art defining the verification gap
- Strengthened connections between sections for Heilmeier alignment
- Clarified how the three-layer approach unifies existing tools
 2026-03-09 12:07:07 -04:00
Dane Sabo
b05d807e02 Auto sync: 2026-03-07 14:19:48 (8 files changed) 
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f1b43da96f Auto sync: 2026-03-04 13:00:34 (8 files changed) 
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c3309cf4a4 Auto sync: 2026-03-03 15:30:14 (10 files changed) 
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fe81103fea Auto sync: 2026-02-27 14:24:49 (6 files changed) 
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6e10a4db81 Add v3 research approach: clean structure, DICE framing, figures 
- Created v3.tex with structure matching Thesis.RA tasks
- Added pyramid figure (strategic/operational/tactical hierarchy)
- Added hybrid automaton figure with guards and dynamics
- Wove in DICE abstract framing (gap, why now, two-layer approach)
- Split contributions marked in blue for review
- Switched main.tex to use v3
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