53 Commits

Author	SHA1	Message	Date
Split	46a7e63b45	Editorial pass: Three-level copy-editing (tactical/operational/strategic) ... Pass 1 (Tactical - sentence level): - Strengthened verb constructions (fail/lack vs cannot/will not) - Improved topic-stress positioning - Reduced weak passive voice - Removed unnecessary future tense (will → present) - Enhanced issue-point positioning per Gopen Pass 2 (Operational - paragraph/section): - Improved transitions between major sections - Enhanced coherence within subsections - Smoothed flow between State of Art → Research Approach Pass 3 (Strategic - document level): - Sharpened Heilmeier catechism alignment - Clarified 'what difference it makes' (economic impact) - Strengthened 'what is new' positioning - Enhanced 'why it will succeed' specificity - Improved 'how we measure success' clarity All changes maintain technical accuracy while improving clarity and impact.	2026-03-09 12:37:50 -04:00
Split	ab627264ac	Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements ... Tactical (sentence-level): - Applied Gopen's principles: improved topic-stress positioning, stronger verbs - Reduced passive voice and unnecessary modifiers - Split long sentences for clarity and emphasis - Tightened redundant phrasing throughout Operational (paragraph/section): - Added explicit transitions between subsections - Improved flow within paragraphs (e.g., control scopes example) - Created parallel structure for related concepts - Enhanced coherence in State of the Art section Strategic (document-level): - Strengthened value proposition (higher vs same assurance) - Improved Heilmeier alignment (why now, what's new, why it will succeed) - Better linkage between State of the Art gap and research goals - Connected economic motivation more explicitly throughout	2026-03-09 12:19:07 -04:00
Dane Sabo	c5e7784810	first commit	2026-02-06 20:23:52 -05:00