53 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
751a25780f Editorial pass: tactical, operational, and strategic improvements
Tactical (sentence-level):
- Strengthened weak verbs and passive constructions
- Improved issue-point positioning (old info first, new info in stress position)
- Removed unnecessary hedging phrases
- Fixed active/passive voice for clarity

Operational (paragraph/section):
- Added transition sentences between major subsections
- Strengthened flow between State of the Art and Research Approach
- Added connecting tissue between continuous controller types
- Improved coherence within outcomes section

Strategic (document-level):
- Made 'what's new' explicit with highlighted innovation statement
- Added summary paragraph to State of the Art defining the verification gap
- Strengthened connections between sections for Heilmeier alignment
- Clarified how the three-layer approach unifies existing tools
2026-03-09 12:07:07 -04:00
Dane Sabo
b05d807e02 Auto sync: 2026-03-07 14:19:48 (8 files changed)
M  2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex

M  3-research-approach/v3.tex

M  main.aux

M  main.fdb_latexmk

M  main.log

M  main.pdf

M  main.synctex.gz

M  main.toc
2026-03-07 14:19:48 -05:00
Dane Sabo
b4a4429a6b Auto sync: 2026-02-27 14:12:02 (10 files changed)
A  2-state-of-the-art/v2.tex

M  main.aux

A  main.fdb_latexmk

AM main.fls

MM main.log

MM main.pdf

A  main.synctex(busy)

A  main.synctex.gz
2026-02-27 14:12:02 -05:00