# First Pass
**Category:** 
Framework / Modelling 

**Context:** 
Showing that CPS can't be modeled like linear systems.

**Correctness:** 
Who knows.

**Contributions:** 
A big focus on **deterministic** models

**Clarity:** 
Some grammar mistakes and significant jabbering.

# Second Pass
**What is the main thrust?**

**What is the supporting evidence?**

**What are the key findings?**

# Third Pass
**Recreation Notes:**

**Hidden Findings:**

**Weak Points? Strong Points?**