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@@ -74,6 +74,7 @@ Topic: Robust control can find a set of plants with which a given controller wil
 Point: But when verifying robustness of a controller implementation, the set of allowable plants is useless. (then talk about why)
 
 **Fourth Paragraph: Research Approach**
-Topic: Generating perturbations is a strenuous task
+Topic: Generating perturbations requires a lot of effort. 
+Point: We look to generative models to accelerate perturbed plant generation. 
 
 **Fifth Paragraph: Broader Impact**
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