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**Goal:** The goal of this research is to generate artificial light.
|**Quality**|**Outcome**|
|---|---|
|Good|Use electricity to generate incandescent light from a wire filament.|
|Vague|Use electricity to make light.|
|Unmeasurable|Understand how incandescent light can be made with electricity.|
|Verbose|Use AC or DC electricity to generate light as a result of heating a wire filament to sufficiently high temperatures.|
|Not goal related|Determine the relationship between filament temperature and the characteristic of the light emitted.|
| **Quality** | **Outcome** |
| ---------------- | -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
| Good | Use electricity to generate incandescent light from a wire filament. |
| Vague | Use electricity to make light. |
| Unmeasurable | Understand how incandescent light can be made with electricity. |
| Verbose | Use AC or DC electricity to generate light as a result of heating a wire filament to sufficiently high temperatures. |
| Not goal related | Determine the relationship between filament temperature and the characteristic of the light emitted. |
How many outcomes should you have? You want the reviewer to be able to remember your outcomes --- they should be able to recall your outcomes throughout the proposal--- so don't make too many, but don't make too few since that runs the risk of suggesting either a narrow scope for the research or overly broad outcomes that don't define the research sufficiently. Between three and five is about right. Less than three is too few --- the reviewer wonders what else you might be able accomplish. More than five is too much --- the reviewer thinks that you are over committing yourself. My preference is three outcomes, and there is room for more if you absolutely need them.