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**Goal:** The goal of this research is to generate artificial light. **Goal:** The goal of this research is to generate artificial light.
|**Quality**|**Outcome**| | **Quality** | **Outcome** |
|---|---| | ---------------- | -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
|Good|Use electricity to generate incandescent light from a wire filament.| | Good | Use electricity to generate incandescent light from a wire filament. |
|Vague|Use electricity to make light.| | Vague | Use electricity to make light. |
|Unmeasurable|Understand how incandescent light can be made with electricity.| | Unmeasurable | Understand how incandescent light can be made with electricity. |
|Verbose|Use AC or DC electricity to generate light as a result of heating a wire filament to sufficiently high temperatures.| | Verbose | Use AC or DC electricity to generate light as a result of heating a wire filament to sufficiently high temperatures. |
|Not goal related|Determine the relationship between filament temperature and the characteristic of the light emitted.| | Not goal related | Determine the relationship between filament temperature and the characteristic of the light emitted. |
How many outcomes should you have? You want the reviewer to be able to remember your outcomes --- they should be able to recall your outcomes throughout the proposal--- so don't make too many, but don't make too few since that runs the risk of suggesting either a narrow scope for the research or overly broad outcomes that don't define the research sufficiently. Between three and five is about right. Less than three is too few --- the reviewer wonders what else you might be able accomplish. More than five is too much --- the reviewer thinks that you are over committing yourself. My preference is three outcomes, and there is room for more if you absolutely need them. How many outcomes should you have? You want the reviewer to be able to remember your outcomes --- they should be able to recall your outcomes throughout the proposal--- so don't make too many, but don't make too few since that runs the risk of suggesting either a narrow scope for the research or overly broad outcomes that don't define the research sufficiently. Between three and five is about right. Less than three is too few --- the reviewer wonders what else you might be able accomplish. More than five is too much --- the reviewer thinks that you are over committing yourself. My preference is three outcomes, and there is room for more if you absolutely need them.