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 			- The first sentence you write is critically important and should explicitly say what you're going to do, no bs
 			- 'The goal of this research is to ...'
 			- *Explain what you're trying to do, using absolutely no jargon*
-			- One to three sentences. Be concrete. You should be clear in the goal, but 
+			- One to three sentences. Be concrete. You should be clear in the goal, specific enough to seem feasible, but not too too narrow.
+		- Rest of paragraph based writing
+			- Briefly cover other  sections. How will you get to your goal, what will be done, and who will care?
+			- This is basically an ad for your researcher. The reviewer of your proposal wants to know, if this project is approved and funded, what are they going to get.
+				- What are they buying?
+				- What is the product of your effort?
+				- What will you achieve?
+
+## Outcomes Based Approach (ME)
+-" If we are successful, we will able to do the following:"
+- 3-5 clear and concise **capabilities**.
+- What is a capability? It's what we'll be able to DO after the research is successful, that we cannot do now.